selfbiased
2005-09-06 + 10:38 p.m.

a kiss of forked tongues

First impression: Artsy. You're very serious in your entries, that was the first thing I noticed when I started reading. Nothing more than what you want to say, no rambling, no messing around. This is just your diary. Nothing more, nothing less, and you can tell by the first sentence you read.

Contents: As mentioned, this diary is just a diary. I can tell that you care about it, that it has a place in your life. You really like doing this, and it shines through. But there's nothing more to it than that. This is more for you and the habit of writing down what you do, than for an audience. And there's no reason for it to be more than that. This works well. Could be categorized as a bit boring from time to time, but that's because you don't make anything look like something it's not. This is just your life, plain and simple, with all that comes to it. You don't need any fancy things to talk about, you don't need any amazing words and novel-like stories, this is just great for what it is. Your life. Honest, sometimes boring and real.

Favourite entry: None.

Errors: No errors, but I think your links are a bit... messed up. But if you like it that way, I won't stop you. It's just a bit messy and would look much better if they were a bit more organized.

The thing I remember the most about your diary: Erin. I'm a sucker for quotes like this: i'm so in love, i should be ashamed.

All in all: 4 out of 6 possible

kiss + tell

new + old + profile + complaints? + pretty please + rules + points + pending + design + image + host