Simply Beautiful

First impression: You say yourself that pink and flowers are "so you", so I guess I'll just go with that. Score: 20

Contact: Everything in order here. Score: 10

Contents: I think you jump a lot from subject to subject in your entries. One paragraph can be about Ricky and your break, and then you just switch, and suddenly.. you're at the movies with your mom and write like nothing has happened. I'm not a big fan of entries like that. Drop trying to be funny and talking to the readers.. I don't care if you're going out to brush your dog or which movie you saw last with your mom. I care about why you wake up with puffy eyes and why you cry so much. Talk about that, and when you do.. don't change the subject so quickly, it only makes you seem dis-honest. And, honey, it's not pathetic to hang out with you mom. It's cute. Having a mom you can do stuff with is one of the greatest things in life. She's the friend that won't bail on you if you act a little bitchy one day. Take care of that :)I would put a bit more emotion into it all. I think it would help you if you stopped thinking about the people who read this diary, and start thinking about what you would write if only you read it. I guess you would have switched all that "Today I went shopping.."-things, with "He looked at me, and I felt all..."-thingies instead. Trust me. Diaries are personal. Make yours even more. It can never be too much! Score: 29

Favourite entry: This entry was so short and yet so honest. Why can't you have more like those? You know you don't have to write a book to tell people how you really feel ;)

Errors: The links I pushed worked and so did the pictures. Score: 10

The thing I remember the most from your diary: I think the letter from Ricky was so incredibely cute!

Total score: 69/80